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Monday, October 4, 2010

The beginning of Chapter 2 Meeting Jermaine

Jermaine was Jamaican.  The prettiest black skin you have ever seen with beautiful hazel green eyes.  When I found out he was Jamaican I told myself to run but I just couldn't stop my curiosity.

My Grandmother always told me that my curiosity would get the best of me, but I didn't want to believe her.

Jermaine was big time dope dealer.  Whatever you needed you called him, and he always had what you wanted, whenever you wanted it.

Me and my girls were out on the town having a girls night out when all of a sudden I get a tap on the shoulder.  I turned to see who it was and it was this fine ass dark skinned brother, built and dressed to the tee.  He smelled so good and had the perfect crooked smile.  I didn't want to boost his ego so I acted like he wasn't my type.  Jermaine was very persistent.  He asked me "would you like to dance?" "Sure," I responded.

Here are your daily questions?

Did the end of chapter 1 flow to good into chapter 2?
Are you still interested in reading?
Do you feel like Jermaine's character is described well and why?
Is there anything that you feel could be better and why?

Thank you to all that participate and make sure you always give your honest opinions.

2 comments:

  1. Jermaine's description is fine. The chapters flow like a river. It is clear that a new journey has begun....BRING IT ON!!!

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  2. Thank you for letting me know how you feel. Please keep your comments coming.

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