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Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Chapter 1 The beginning

People say that the game is to be taught not told. Well I decided to tell how we worked the game.  The dangerous games we played and all of the lives that we played with.

Traveling around the world is something that I always wanted to do as a girl.  Have you ever sat outside and looked in the sky and wonder where the plane was going?  Where the bus or train, that was passing thru, was going?  Where the bus or train, that was thru, was going? Or even which cruise ship was passing by?  Well I finally got my chance to see some of this beautiful country, although it wasn't quite what I had in mind.

My name is Kenya Gardner, the educated, loud and crazy one anyways that's what my friends say.  I always thought that when I grew up, I would be the successful one.  The one that had the great career, married with a family of my own but I realized one day that I was a true hustler.  Now I know you're wondering what kind of hustler and why would a woman want to be known as a hustler or true to the game itself?  I will tell you my story.

Every story has to have a great beginning.  Please answer the following questions.

Does the beginning catch your attention?
Does the beginning make you want to keep reading?
What do you feel about the beginning and why?
If there is anything that you would change or do different, what would it be and why?

Please take a few moments to answer these questions.  I want to know your honest opinions.  Thank you for taking the time out of your busy schedule to let me know how you feel and what you think.  Remember here I am all for the reader.  Your responses help me to get better and bring you great stories all the time.

1 comment:

  1. great begining! Can't wait to learn the game ;)

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